Crimson's Urahara Aplication

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Crimson's Urahara Aplication

Post  Crimson Hatake on Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:49 am

Name: Crimson Hatake

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Age:13

Level of Education: 8th Grade

Years of experience role playing on a Bleach game: This is my fourth wipe, so I've been playing for about a year and a half

Previous figure positions: Espada Commander

I walked into my shop. I looked around and I noticed that it was extremely dirty. " I really need to clean the place up" I said to myself as I removed my hat. I walked to the other side of the shop and grabbed the broom and dust pan. I began to sweep up the spots that were dusty. I gathered all of the dust and moved it to the center of the shop. I crouched down and swept the dust into the dustpan. " All done." I said as looking at my shop. I walked to the counter and took a seat on top of it. My shop door opened I lifted my head and said "How can i help you?" in a polite tone. As i raised my head i seen one of my Shinigami rush into the door. " Crimson, I need your help!" the shinigami exclaimed. I asked "Whats the matter Aroyo?"

" Zuyu has been attacked" the Aroyo told me. " Zuyu has been attacked?" "Attacked by who!?" I asked getting off of the counter. " Zuyu has been attacked by two Arrancar." " Aroyo our new goal is to wipe out the Espada." I told him as i took my glove out of a my pocket. " We will start by killing these two arrancars!" I yelled. I hit my palm on my forehead releasing my soul out of my gigai. " Aroyo what was these Arrancar's name ?" I asked as I stormed out my shop. I looked back at the door as i seen Aroyo come out. Aroyo responded to my question " I'm not sure what there names were but they had tattoos." " One had the number 7 tattooed on his hand and the other had the number 6 tattooed on his tongue." he said " Where were they?" I said. " At the park" Aroyo said.

I utilized my shunpo to reach the park. " I'm sorry i couldn't fight both of them off by myself so i had to come to you master." Aroyo cried out to me " It's OK Aroyo" I said to him as i approached the park. I looked and there they were the two Arrancars. " You attacked Zuyu." I yelled to them as i pulled my zanpakuto out of its shealth. " So you came to avenge your fallen shinigami?" the arrancar asked. " State your names before we kill you!" I cried out. "State them now!" I yelled. " Im Jinjo Espada number 6" Jinjo said. "I'm Kinzo Espada number 7" Kinzo said. " Aroyo you handle Kinzo, while i will handle Jinjo." "You two bastards attacked and killed Zuyu!" "You will die where you stand." I shouted. " Awake, Golden Dragon!" I shouted. My zanpakuto changed. My zanpakuto changed from a blade into to long daggers. The hilt of my zanpakuto was smaller and had strings tied on the end of it.

" Stand in Awe of my Shikai!" I said as i charged towards Jinjo. The distance between me a Jinjo was getting shorter and shorter as i kept charging. I was a few feet away from Jinjo. I threw both of my daggers. I threw one directly at Jinjo and the other in mid-air. I utilized my shunpo to reach the dagger in mid-air. I looked to see how Aroyo was doing. I noticed that he was struggling. I decided to throw my dagger at Kinzo as i came down with a kick. Jinjo looked up and he utilized his sonido to get in the air to fight me. " Damn it didn't work but at least i manged to help Aroyo." I said as i seen Jinjo attempting to punch me in my face. I moved my head to the right avoiding the punch.

I attempted to punch Jinjo on his face. The punched landed then I kicked on his stomach. Jinjo grabbed my foot and threw me on the floor. I got up and seen that Aroyo was actually beating Kinzo. " I see he's excelling quickly" I thought as i ran to pickup my dagger. I picked up my dagger, I looked up and to my surprise Jinjo blasted a cero at me. " Shit!" I thought as i threw my dagger within the cero as i dived to left. The cero blast suddenly stopped. I looked up and i seen my dagger in Jinjo's Mouth. " You're finished now!" " Jinjo!" Kinzo screamed as Aroyo took advantage and stabbed in the stomach. I utilized my shunpo to get in front of Jinjo. I removed my Dagger and stabbed him in the stomach and kicked my dagger in side the wound.

I removed my dagger and approached my other one and picked it up from the ground. I released my shikai and moved towards Aroyo. " We've avenged Zuyu!" i said as we walked back to the shop. I put my zanpakuto back in its sheath as i said " 2 Espada down" as i reached my shop. Me and Aroyo walked inside my shop. I walked up to my gigai and picked it and put it on the counter. I went inside my gigai and said to Aroyo " You have a lot of training to do if you want to defeat we want to defeat those Espada, So lets get working!" i said as i approached the back door. "Yes Sir!" Aroyo said

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Re: Crimson's Urahara Aplication

Post  Darwin Blake on Tue Feb 21, 2012 9:21 pm

I approve. Good Luck~

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Re: Crimson's Urahara Aplication

Post  Crimson Hatake on Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:37 am

Darwin Blake wrote:I approve. Good Luck~

Thanks i hope i get it

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Uh errrors

Post  Avainer on Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:51 am

22 errors found. Good luck son.

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